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  1. I think this will work, but the writing as it exists now doesn’t seem to be about the built environment yet. The “Explanation” slide… Is it referring to your explanation of the evidence or their explanation of the belugas? I think the title of the slide isn’t working to clarify yet. How does any of this help make an argument about the built environment?

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